I am liking the idea of the game so far. I only have 2 gripes, and they are reasonably minor, with a bit of advice. Some work needs to be done on the lighting. The shadows and lights are harsh leading to sinister feelings I do not think you intended and changing the color of hair from black to a light grey. Second, the little pop ups that say things like "She will definitely remember that" are jarring cause they imply choices I did not make. I know this is not fully done but if you do not intend to put choices there for us to make maybe take them out. Oh. And scenes where you have the "Other Guy" appear should be wearing what "Main Guy" is wearing. It really brings to focus that they are still one in the same even if one is trying to disconnect from the other. Just a fun screen writing thing. Very good game all around though. Cheers!
This is a very interesting game with a engaging story and main character with some good looking models to boot, so honestly keep up the good work.
That being said, the shadows are very intense -this sometimes leads to the main characters eyes having a too much shadow, small gripe but i thought I should bring it up- and some rooms feels claustrophobic -such as the headmasters office- perhaps its thecamera angle or the room itself idk . I supposed lowering the intensity of the vignette could help do away with that claustrophobic feeling but I'll leave that choice to you. All in all, it's a rough game (but that's where diamonds are found) with an interesting story.
Now I am no game maker so if you cannot make these changes I understand but at least try to consider it for any future renders for this awesome game you're making.
is this a click and read VN only or sandbox style? Thanks in advanced. From what I read in your description, it sounds interesting. I’ll keep an eye on this project.
Hey! It has a few sandbox elements, though I have not fully implemented them. It has a lot of VN-style scenes, but I also like to give freedom to the players to choose which girls they'd like to interact with! Therefore, girls will stay in different places around the college, and you can choose which one of them you would like to dive into their stories. But while you're in the prologue and the game presents the mechanics, you'll have to talk to all of them. But later on, as the updates start to progress, you'll be able to choose. :)
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I am liking the idea of the game so far. I only have 2 gripes, and they are reasonably minor, with a bit of advice. Some work needs to be done on the lighting. The shadows and lights are harsh leading to sinister feelings I do not think you intended and changing the color of hair from black to a light grey. Second, the little pop ups that say things like "She will definitely remember that" are jarring cause they imply choices I did not make. I know this is not fully done but if you do not intend to put choices there for us to make maybe take them out. Oh. And scenes where you have the "Other Guy" appear should be wearing what "Main Guy" is wearing. It really brings to focus that they are still one in the same even if one is trying to disconnect from the other. Just a fun screen writing thing. Very good game all around though. Cheers!
This is a very interesting game with a engaging story and main character with some good looking models to boot, so honestly keep up the good work.
That being said, the shadows are very intense -this sometimes leads to the main characters eyes having a too much shadow, small gripe but i thought I should bring it up- and some rooms feels claustrophobic -such as the headmasters office- perhaps its the camera angle or the room itself idk . I supposed lowering the intensity of the vignette could help do away with that claustrophobic feeling but I'll leave that choice to you. All in all, it's a rough game (but that's where diamonds are found) with an interesting story.
Now I am no game maker so if you cannot make these changes I understand but at least try to consider it for any future renders for this awesome game you're making.
*edit: added an example for the shadow critic
Played for about an hour or so. Nice game! I like it so far.
is this a click and read VN only or sandbox style? Thanks in advanced. From what I read in your description, it sounds interesting. I’ll keep an eye on this project.
Hey! It has a few sandbox elements, though I have not fully implemented them. It has a lot of VN-style scenes, but I also like to give freedom to the players to choose which girls they'd like to interact with! Therefore, girls will stay in different places around the college, and you can choose which one of them you would like to dive into their stories. But while you're in the prologue and the game presents the mechanics, you'll have to talk to all of them. But later on, as the updates start to progress, you'll be able to choose. :)